Monday, April 18, 2011

My First Villanelle

Hugging tightly closely fitting 
Sparkling shining like a bright suns rays 
Swaying bowing slowly spinning 

Now our dance is just beginning 
Can you see her bright eyes blaze? 
Hugging tightly closely fitting 

Hear the piano lightly playing 
The dance continues in a daze 
Swaying bowing slowly spinning 

Hushed voices softly singing 
Surrounding us in an opaque haze 
Hugging tightly closely fitting 

Eyes shining tears falling 
No escape from her stunning gaze 
Swaying, bowing,slowly spinning 

See now the dance is ending 
We are alone for this final phase 
Hugging tightly, closely fitting 
Swaying bowing slowly spinning 

poster's note: I never came up with a title for this piece, it's from my freshman year feel free to offer titles if you feel so inclined.

2 comments:

  1. This is great.

    How about "Together Alone"? That sounds kinda cliche, actually...

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  2. totally awesome.
    thought provoking and full of imagery.
    Title...mmmmm how about "Love's Dance"?

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